by Tio_Narratore
I enjoyed the sensual, almost raw, feel to this story. It read like a perfect silk scarf that at once caresses and tingles the senses.
And I particularly enjoyed the slightly surprise ending!
Very nicely done! Well written and perfectly paced. And a clever twist on the old "it was her XXX all along" ploy.
I had to stop several times reading this.
I'm still breathless.
I LOVE the surprising ending!
Lovely! Very nice build up and nice little twist at the end. Thanks!
she didn't dog ear the pages. Wow. A story with a man who is straight, commanding, literary, and appreciative of a fine fashion accessory. Be still my beating heart.
Exciting with sweet romantic twist in the tail.
(Just a tad Althusserian? ;) )
This is the first of your stories I've read - I loved the twist on the female librarian theme, and of course the ending " surprise." Clean, beautiful language, sensuous lines. Really well done!