All Comments on 'In the Library'

by Tio_Narratore

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fire_breezefire_breezeabout 13 years ago

I enjoyed the sensual, almost raw, feel to this story. It read like a perfect silk scarf that at once caresses and tingles the senses.

And I particularly enjoyed the slightly surprise ending!

Carnevil9Carnevil9about 13 years ago
Nice!

Very nicely done! Well written and perfectly paced. And a clever twist on the old "it was her XXX all along" ploy.

SweetMajSweetMajalmost 13 years ago
HOT !!!

I had to stop several times reading this.

I'm still breathless.

I LOVE the surprising ending!

SaucyminxSaucyminxover 11 years ago
Libraries have become a bit racier since I worked there

Lovely! Very nice build up and nice little twist at the end. Thanks!

NekoParksNekoParksover 11 years ago
It's a good thing. . .

she didn't dog ear the pages. Wow. A story with a man who is straight, commanding, literary, and appreciative of a fine fashion accessory. Be still my beating heart.

NaokoSmithNaokoSmithabout 11 years ago
Liberties in the Library!

Exciting with sweet romantic twist in the tail.

(Just a tad Althusserian? ;) )

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Lovely!

This is the first of your stories I've read - I loved the twist on the female librarian theme, and of course the ending " surprise." Clean, beautiful language, sensuous lines. Really well done!

DonnaBeckDonnaBeckalmost 10 years ago
Well done!

Very clever, well written, and sexy!

rightbankrightbankabout 9 years ago
the ending took a good story

and made it a great one.

EmmelineEmmelineabout 7 years ago
Great story

Loved it, well-written!

roveroneroveroneover 1 year ago

wtf-erotic cpling!?!

non consent/rape

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