All Comments on 'In The Library Ch. 07'

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HurbsterHurbsteralmost 10 years ago

Well, that took a nasty turn for the worse. Probably should put a warning up about the gay incest, I certainly was not expecting it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
No more incest please

Blimey, that took a rather different twist.... Your writing up to this chapter has kept me engaged, an interesting story line with good hot sex! Didn't expect the whole anal sex with dad thing though (didn't like as I don't enjoy incest stories). Apart from that, keep writing.... LK

LoquiSordidaAdMeLoquiSordidaAdMeover 6 years ago
I don't mind it so much

I'm no fan of this kind of incest either, but in this supernatural context, it's not so objectionable. The author is slowly being driven mad by the demon's escalating perversion, and this seems like exactly the kind of perversion that would drive one mad. This works for me, but it's only half way through the story. I'm curious to see how Grace is going to escalate beyond this.

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A writer of mostly urban erotica, with more café scenes than a classic French movie; occasional departures to more fantastic worlds, off planet and on.

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