All Comments on 'Inappropriate Ch. 01'

I enjoyed reading your story and I hope you continue it.

I love the build up of tension but don't be afraid to write a three pager and give some action between the twins.

I agree, awesome start and can't wait for more

Loved it.

Super good start . I like the slow build . Can't wait to read more .

Very believable, just erotic enough to keep it interesting. I don't usually go for brother/sister stories so much so the fact that you hooked me right away speaks volumes. Gave you 5 stars. Thanks for sharing and please give us more.

P.S I just love your username

max052

Good beginning ruined by it's brevity!

you should have put this aside and waited before posting it until you had enough to write a COMPLETE chapter. most readers will not look for more of your stories now because they know that 99% of all writers here NEVER FINISH A STORY. since this is the incest area before posting be sure your story HAS some incest in it.

So What? Does this go anywhere? A reasonably good introduction, but nothing more. It is certainly not a chapter, since it merely introduces a situation and doesn't develop it at all. Please do develop it.

Not too bad for a teaser. I expect to see a 3 page continuation.

Looking forward to more!

YOU MAY CONTINUE

I want to read about when he realizes that Jennifer is the woman that has his heart and love and he doesn't give a shit that she is his sister, since she already knows it to be true.

Thanks for the good read..

Very solid introduction. I really love where you are going. The build up is the best. Keep it up.

Thank you all for your feedback. This story is my most ambitious to date, so your encouragement and suggestions are greatly appreciated. Just submitted Chapter 2, so please read and review.

Hope you continue with them casually seeing each other partially naked and accidentally exposing their genitals.

Also with some humor about sniffing his sisters soiled sheer string bikini panties.

This should be a very juicy series. Its wrong. Can't wait til the big moment!

It was short. I wanted to give this a 5 but instead I'll not rate this at all.

Go there.

Really good ... start, or, maybe, introduction..?

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