All Comments on 'The Incest Spiral Ch. 01'

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Great start and wonderful writing. Please keep it going

very natural and detailed and good character development of the mother.

erotic

:-)

I really loved the story.. hope to see the second part soon please bit longer this time..

loved the build up can not wait to read more,

Enjoyed it but i personally prefer stories like this one in particular to be written in the 2nd or 3rd person instead of the 1st. Other than that, good but short read.

Keep it up.

i did enjoy reading your story,it seemed more real to me than those wich just accidently just sart bumping and grinding the night away

Erotic and fun, thanks.

Nice start, slow build up that will make for a fantastic series. Bring on the next chapter!!