All Comments on 'Independent Contractor'

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brian358brian358almost 13 years ago
More Mimi!

Love the concept of this one, and its written in a carefree, fun style.

Add a gorgeous 19 year old with F (Borderline G) cups and you have a winner!

I, too, would love to see a sequel.

More Mimi! :-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Great story!

Would love to see ch 2!

peebudypeebudyalmost 13 years ago

good story! I like the realistic descriptions of the characters. not everyone has beautiful bodies and 12 inch cocks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
5 Stars

The only error I caught, and it might seem picky; however, when you are referring to a specific person by title, even if not using their proper name, it should be capitalized.

"Well to be fair to a president, it isn't technically sex"

President should be capitalized because you are referring to a specific person or position (no pun intended).

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