All Comments on 'Indian Family Reunion Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
hello maha

ur start was definetely gud, but hey it needs much more spice at the end. where's d choda chodi between d mom n son... commn pl fare better next time....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
its great maha

its great!! its readable took in natuaral way.love between mother and son can also takes place in this way. after all they are caring each other.thank u

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
hai

nalla irukku kathai

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Aviation High School

Great story.

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