All Comments on 'Industrialist's Daughter In Law'

Hi,

Really your stronghold is in making the plot riveting and bringing in a story rather than a sexual rendezvous. The plot was like a thriller and I loved the situation. You could have developed it even better into a lengthier story but this one is sure a good work. Keep it up!!

It could have been a little longer, especially at the end where the details about the scandal are out. More details about Shweta's pussy would have helped too. Nicely written nevertheless. Keep it up. @};-

You are one hell of a writer...

But very less commented...

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Keep going waiting for more...

amazing story..possibly the best indian story on this site..please write more!!

Very intricately written.... I am a.fan now.

Excellent story angel228

The end was truly unexpected.

Thanks and please keep writing such marvelous stories

Yogender Singh

yogender5er@gmail.com

Very well written!