All Comments on 'Innocent Pawn Ch. 09'

YES! I loved this as much as I love the previous chapters (maybe more). The tied-up scene was just the best so far *g* Funny and tender and all *sighs* I regret the fact that the series is coming to an end, but I'm giddy for your next series.... Keep the great stuff coming! :D

Ephe.

you've done it again. your writting is incredible, elegant, touching, sensual. thank you so much.

I guess I should say thank you for the next chapter, but did ya have to make it a cliffhanger???? I mean, don't ya think you've tortured us enough already????

What a great chapter! Very angst in parts and very very hot! And that cliffhanger? I?m going to go crazy until I read the next chapter.

I hate for this story to end in the next chapter but I look forward to reading the entire story over? and over again. Hurry with the next chapter, PLEASE!

That chapter had me squirming in my seat! I have to go jump my hunny now.

...why every one of your stories are rated HOT!!

You are an amazing writer, and this is another glowing example of your talents. ;-)

My heavens I love Bella and Leonn!!! I think they need to have further dangerous adventures too! Maybe a second set of stories, like No Longer A Pawn. IT JUST HAS to be a MAN who has captured her and not Marie! I can't stand her and besides it is so much hotter to have Leonn worried about Bella in another man's arms!!!I am betting it is Marie, but I still wish it were someone else....like her father, or a man Marie has hired or something. This needs to be an even TEN chapters too, hahahaha, not that I am greedy...I'm just WISHFUL THINKING!!! LOVE your work!

Just wonderful.

SN

another wonderfully written story... i wish it would last longer! i also think that maybe a man should take bella away instead of marie. it'll be so exciting. but it finally has to end :( i wish there were more chapters to come! i love this story the most because it's one of my favorite fantasies. now i have to go find my boyfriend, hehe ;)

A Real Gem of a Story... The Tied up scene was Sensual as it was Hilarious.. Nice to See Leonn Get the same *punishment*. Another ending in cliffhanger... You are too much.. Can't wait for the next one..

Gary

Thanks for another great story...and for putting evil thoughts in my head. My man doesn't know it yet, but he's about to be tied up tonight! ;)

PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE continue ASAP!!!!!!!!!!

Well rounded story all around:

good characters> sweet

plot> romantic even with the reluctance theme (my favprite kind ;) ).

I'm anxiously waiting for the next installment.

...for the next chapter. I check back everyday to see if it's up yet lol. I can't wait! :) :)

I actually was just browsing around, figured I would check top submissions, after reading chapter 9 (it was rated number one) I had to go back and read all the other chapters, now I'm totally hooked on the story! Can't wait for the conclusion!! Beautifully done, absolutely wonderful, I can see why the rating is the way it is :-D

ahhhh!! i think this is an addiction! I've been checking back everyday for the last chapter... please post soon, before I go mad.

wonderful!

Come on come on......i'm dying here!

i LOVED It....please post soon, you're torturing us here...

All I can say is boy I can't wait for what happens next. I read all nine installments straight through one right after another and I just got finished. I only have one other story, then I will have read everything you've ever posted. You have a fan in me!!!!!! I'd like to be e-mailed whenever you post anything new. How do I do that?

This is entirely toooo good to have just one more chapter, I understand that the next will probably be the last...I only pray that it is not. I can't believe how your words have me so wrapped up in their world. Goodness, please post the next chapter soon and I hope you surprise your fans with more chapters of this wonderful story.

Continue the story, please! I'm dying for more!

Holy crap. DO NOT LEAVE ME HANGING HERE! This story is so hot, and you have a lovely talent for writing.

Holy, love never happened this way to me. Don't leave me hanging! I love how you make the harsh story have a pretty happy ending most of the time. It's a TRUE fantasy!

More more more!

I was completely drawn into this story. Every chapter was incredibly written. Please write the next chapter soon!!!

Waiting impatiently...lol

That was fucking hot that she tried to suck him off, and his loss of control was delicious

What a sexy story! Absolutely mind blowing!!!

I was hoping she would ignore him and make him come in her mouth. Maybe next time :) xx

Oh my god! The plot twist when she ties him up just like he had tied her!

The whole thing was so sweetly written <3

Rarely one finds a nice story of woman tying up the man and making love enjoyed by both which is not forced/humiliation sex. It was beautifully written. This evoked interest to hunt more of borderline BDSM or love making where woman controls man's pleasure.