All Comments on 'Insomnia Ch. 03'

by EmmyLou93

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Carnal_FlowerCarnal_Floweralmost 10 years ago
Hot!

I love this series. Hot hot hot. And more more more!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Great story!

Love it! More chapters please!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Paragraphing and Structure

It was a good premise, but it's terribly structured. No paragraphs, separating dialogue from descriptions and actions. You should re-structure it, and resubmit it. I see the other chapters in this series were fine, it must have been an error with the transfer to Literotica.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Sick love.

This is just a rape story. Brutal thoughts, brutal actions.

lukng4funlukng4funover 9 years ago
Very Arousing

Just found the series, glad I didn't have to wait.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Please update another chapter. God this was so fucking hot

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Cummmmmmmm

Had me cumming on every chapter!!! Please write another!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
To "Really"

Why are you reading the incest section? I think the plot is very sexy.

KittyMuffin1889KittyMuffin1889about 2 years ago

This was hot, please continue this series. I would love to read more.

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