by DScor
I thought this story was amazing. I loved the images your words created. I think music has the ability to take us out of ourselves for a while, and out of the world we normally inhabit. I enjoyed seeing this belief given substance in your story and I enjoyed how you linked it to love. Please write some more.
An amazing prose treasure. You've woven a complex melody of language into an intricate and delightful tale of the death and rebirth of an artistic soul. Masterfully done, but with minor flaws. I am usually very off put by spelling, grammar and usage errors, but this is the first Literotica work that I'll rate a "5" inspite of it's need for additional proofreading. I do hope that you will allow your muse to expand your library of shared work. Thank you.
Fantastic, beautiful. So good that I think it deserves another round of tightening up, so that it sparkles as perfectly as it should. But I only say that because it's so deftly constructed.
This is why you make love to musicians.