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CatHeathCatHeathover 12 years ago
Loved it.

I thought this story was amazing. I loved the images your words created. I think music has the ability to take us out of ourselves for a while, and out of the world we normally inhabit. I enjoyed seeing this belief given substance in your story and I enjoyed how you linked it to love. Please write some more.

Ton8tyTon8tyover 12 years ago
Breathtakingly, Beautifully Brilliant

An amazing prose treasure. You've woven a complex melody of language into an intricate and delightful tale of the death and rebirth of an artistic soul. Masterfully done, but with minor flaws. I am usually very off put by spelling, grammar and usage errors, but this is the first Literotica work that I'll rate a "5" inspite of it's need for additional proofreading. I do hope that you will allow your muse to expand your library of shared work. Thank you.

rockchaserrockchaserover 5 years ago

Fantastic, beautiful. So good that I think it deserves another round of tightening up, so that it sparkles as perfectly as it should. But I only say that because it's so deftly constructed.

This is why you make love to musicians.

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