by Decayed Angel
Not the typical "boss fucks the intern" type of story, the ironic twist of not being able to escape is a perfect ending.
Ignore the idot that doesn't take the time to actually write his/her own story before smashing the work of someone else. Just keep up the great work
As it is your fantasy, you may have condoms used or not used. Ignore the ass who gave you the zero because he doesn't like condoms in what he reads. A score given for such a reason should not even be allowed. I would have given you a 75; but gave a 100 to try to make the average better because of "mr condom". Keep writing.
This may have been a fantasy, but in reality condoms make sense -- nice to include them in a sexy story. As for "Mr. Zero," I think he was scoring himself. A 100 should help make up for his lame attitude.
From everything I've read thus far-- and it being quite a lot-- this piece really turned me on without it being so obscene. The characters felt real, the situation felt real, the sensations even.
I think this story might have pulled me from a literary slump in my erotica. I thank you, and Inter Affair.