Internal Affairs Ch. 08

I think I'll just call it a day for this site. It isn't your fault. I have good and bad days. Sorry to have wasted your time. ah and I'm seventy years old.

All I find is A whole lot more shiiittt

Rotten absolutely rotten writing

wrong words,, half words,, misspelled words,, miss placed words

i thought I was finished to be honest. I prefer to end a story letting people wonder what happens and fill in the blanks themselves. You imagination is lots better than mine. I just open the door and let you wander inside.

That's why people are frustrated by the fact that so many of the plot lines you create go unexplored when the stories end abruptly. Being more of an optimist, I like to think that the reason you do that is so you have a jumping off place to start a new story someday.

I really don't care how many or how few read these stories. I write to stay sane. I end my stories the way life ends. Every thing in life is either open ended or a lie.

I wish you had said you think you are writing interesting things, but 'in my opinion you are not'. Truth is it's your opinion. I value all comments good and bad, but I learned early on that it is just the opinion of the person and has nothing to do with what I write, just what they read.

Now that Hillary knows that Roger is on to her, he's got three options: take her down along with the rest of the dirty cops right away, turn her against them and get her working for the DOJ, or cut and run for the hills and DOJ witness protection. If he doesn't, he's a dead man walking.

Of all the people I would expect 'Over The Falls' to get it. That is assuming over the falls refers to Sherlock Holmes' fall over the falls. (Victoria Falls I think it was).

I assume this story is concluded because, as of this chapter, it is listed as "concluded" on SOL. If the author was intending to write more, the story would be listed as "in progress" on that site. If the story were abandoned (or as you say, left without an ending until something came to you) it would be listed as "incomplete and inactive".

I am an avid fan of Literotica, however the lack of a status marker for stories is one of the few failings on the Literotica site.

Hope that helps to make sense of why this last chapter is seen as so weak.

MW, I do not understand why the commentators assume you do not have further chapters to add to this story.

I have a big pule of stories that I have not yet, maybe never, come up with satisfactory endings.

Inspiration cannot be rushed. Creativity will take as long as it takes to satisfy you the author.

I have separated my stories into two groups. First, I need to figure out a decent ending too. Wish me luck!

The second group I have come to consider a new genre, I call 'Life Stories'. Just as Real Life, they have no real ending.

I will continue to add new chapters or affiliated stories, as long as my health allows me to write or I die. But no promises or deadlines.

This would be an interesting chapter, a very interesting chapter but as a finish for this story it is horribly abrupt and unsatisfying. It's almost as if the writer decided he didn't wish to finish the story and simply ended it mid arc. None of the essential questions of this character are answered. The questions about this corrupt police force are given only a summary treatment and one is left wondering why the author wrote something they didn't want to finish?