by shaunreagh
Actually had something like the first half of the story happen to me when I was younger. Not a fun experience.
As always, very well written ! !
May be a good idea to write another part (story) from the girl's side and add some of the attacker's as well ! ! !
Shawnhero
Thanks for the comments. Service now resumed. Briefer more experimental work here in literotica, more polished stuff on kindle and others as Qatsu Briefs. To the first comment, sorry you had a bad experience, but to be erotic there has to be potential for rejection, even disaster, to give it an edge. Whatever, I hope you set him straight! (Or are you a guy, and were you sitting in front?)
great story as always. went to amazon to find that the 'books' were repeats of what is available here. did not chk where they have been 'improved'. this is a great oppertunity for you to modify/improve the stories a bit. i have done a mod on 'usha marketing' which you may like and include when you post this for kindle. i believe that when the public catches onto you , you will be a run away success. you may think of compiling four or five stories together and charge $ 7 or 8 instead of only $0.99.
The Qatsu Briefs 1 and 2, rewrites of two earlier stories, were meant to be free, but Kindle wouldn't let me do that. QB3, out this month, is a rewritten first half of Bridge With The Stauntons, with an entirely new second part, so is now twice the length. QB4, out next month, an audition, is entirely new, also longer. Your suggestion to bunch them is exactly what I intend, but still keeping price down. QB1-5 for 3.99. Thanks for your comments and support. - Shaun
I guess it's like that, sometimes they're better, sometimes they're not. I'm active now in qatsu.com, so if you'd like to tell me where this falls down ...
Had me coming by the end. The foreplay was more arousing than the actual sex part, though.