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by frog1999

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cheesy80scheesy80salmost 16 years ago
Do you "need" this "all the time?"

Do you really need to "quote" every euphamism you "plant" in your story? It detracts from the read, is unnecessary and amateurish.

And instead of using euphamisms, try actually describing things a little more eloquently. It could really add to what is a routine fuck story.

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