All Comments on 'Into a New Life'

The usual bullshit, ‘I will never hurt you’ immediately after slapping her and rapidly followed by vaginal and anal rape. So physical and emotional trauma from the start. Has she consented to any of this? Then he declares she has no free will and is entering into a breeding scenario. You’ve given no explanation of why she’s there or how this has come about.

This isn’t BDSM, no sign of SAFE, SANE & CONSENSUAL. In my opinion it’s a load of crap

If you want to do a slave story then FFS make it a fantasy. If you’re aiming for TPE (shudder) then she has to be able to commit of her own free will and not be slapped around, tortured and raped until she agrees. As if smeared blood on a piece of paper meant anything to anyone ever, unless it’s a lame attempt to clean her up, fyi tissue or a damp cloth work much better.

If this is what floats your boat good luck to you I’m out. I’d suggest you get a proof reader/editor. Btw an organism is a life form and an orgasm is a sexual release during intercourse.