All Comments on 'Investigating'

by 2Xwidderwoman

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SoCalOvidSoCalOvidover 15 years ago
Excellence is her middle name!

Another in the line of excellent stories by the Widderwoman! Well written, great dialog, and hot sex. This story had an especially unique plot, with its bifurcation between the grim task that the detective is doing (solving what turns out to be two murders,) while at the same time developing a rather playful personal relationship with one of his witnesses. What a fantastic plot idea. And HOW does she turn them out with this quality so quickly?

luvmemoriesluvmemoriesover 15 years ago
tops.

best written sex about.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
great storyline

Very well written

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 15 years ago
Ms. 2X has another winner of a story

Another great story,from a very good author. I enjoy reading your work,and the reasons are multi-faceted.

Firstly, you give life to the work,and as a reader, that makes it believable. Your work is always well written,and your very able when it comes to describing a blow job.This is just two in a long list of reasons, so what else could a reader want.Thanks Widder, you did it again. Rich

cinnamon_kisses12cinnamon_kisses12over 15 years ago
aye

another excellent read!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Love Story w/Spice

Another great story plus all that hot, steamy sex. Wow!!

OleTroubadorOleTroubadorover 14 years ago
Character development

I am in true admiration of how well you build your character's profile. The erotic descriptions in your loving scenes would give a stone statue an erection!

Chuck_AndersonChuck_Andersonabout 14 years ago
What can I say:

What can I say about you stories that I haven't said before. Love them

Chuck,

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
An excellent "slice" out of a reality pie without a doubt!

Well written, some well placed herky-jerky for both major characters when thoughts/emotions became "different".

I can predict that "several to many" chapters would be received superbly.

BRAVO!!

Cracker270Cracker270over 4 years ago

Thoroughly enjoyable. You have a nice way of creating your characters. Almost like someone you would sit down and have coffee with.

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