All Comments on 'Iron Angel Ch. 01'

Very nice work. Will the other vampire from the chatroom return for a threesome? hehe

Thank-you for the compliment!

I do apologize that the narrative is extremely jumpy. I sent the wrong file to be posted to the site. *blush*

See, I tend to conceptualize the rough outline of an entire story, which allows me to write whatever scene most strikes my fancy at the time. Usually I end up with a beginning and an ending and then have to fill in the middle. It's a non-traditional form of writing, but it seems to work for me.

Unfortunately, my strange habit resulted in me accidentally sending the "beginning and ending without a middle" file instead of just Chapter One. *blush* I'll be submitting an edit immediately!

Ah, well. A memorable oops for a first-time author!

I suspect this could be the start of something a little out of the ordinary. I loved the main female character and the changes between the dream world and the real world were brilliantly done and the ending was extremely hot and sensual. The fact that the narrative was a little jumpy was an annoyance but it only means I will look forward to the edit as well as any future instalments with great eagerness.

interesting, enjoyable and hot...not my normal type read that i go for but thought i'd try something new...glad i did. thanks for allowing us to read you and keep up the good work. respectfully fan in Texas naynay