All Comments on 'Iron Rain Pt. 19'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Please continue

I absolutely love this story...

hodunkhodunkalmost 12 years ago
Keep'em Comin!!

Love this story and the author is the best. Thanks for sharing, and yes keep'em comin.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Please, next to the date add the name of the POV character

It is a small criticism but I feel it is a necessary one.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 12 years ago
The last part of the chapter "Serfopoula Island: (Magus)"

I think it would have worked better if it was in the third person instead of the first person, except for the actual dialogue, as if a narrator was telling the story.

I was wondering if the story will end on December, 21, 2012, as in like the Mayan Calender, when the world as we know is supposed to end.

A good and exciting chapter.

Thanks for the good read.

mufdvr88mufdvr88almost 12 years ago
great story

i personally dont generally read stories that are more that a few chapters in length but you have such a great talent for writing that i had to keep reading to finish the whole story i cant wait for the next installment, please keep them coming i cant wait to see how this story ends

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
More Please!

Great story can't wait for the next part!

Ravey19Ravey19over 3 years ago
Great Read Again

No more to say. 5 stars.

Ramen4lifeRamen4lifeover 2 years ago

Not sure if anyone noticed or commented. Nice touch on captain "Moen". Lol.

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22-08-23 Sorry for the extremely long hibernation. My heart attack and recovery have hit me harder than expected. To be honest, it will likely be a bit before I continue. I am struggling with meds and coherent thought at the moment. I'll do my best to continue with stories alr...

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