All Comments on 'Is This It?'

Lovely pacing. lovely ending.

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Wonderful. I was hooked.

There are a couple of punctuation issues a minor edit could fix.

I don't comment much on stories any more but I felt this one deserved praise. It was a beautiful story, thank you for sharing. Yes a little editing would help here and there but the story itself was amazing. Keep writing, I'm off to read your first story now.

Nadia's fear, her belief she's unlovable, and her enormous psychic torment are so palpable in your exceptional story. Bette's compassion, understanding, and willingness to love Nadia through her struggle, fear and anxiety are well rendered. The story felt very personal, autobiographical, perhaps because you did such a good job having it seem so believable. Thank you.

Proofreading and editing would make your words read more smoothly, and add clarity in several places.

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You've Written A Wonderful Love Story. And

If I Quit Crying. I May Read It All Over Again.

Thank You For Such A Wonderful Love Story !

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A very touching & romantic love story! You have a wonderful style & look forward to reading more of your stories like this.

Sometimes I feel like I'm a soulless robot, until I read a story like this... The humanity, passion, the love in Ijay's stories help break down my barriers, and I can't help but feel. A beautiful writer!

I enjoyed the growth of Nadia.