All Comments on 'Island Castaways'

Great story. I felt myself wishing I could find a place like that for my wife and I.

I want to go there

I usually like to read the short stories for the sex, which this had plenty of. But the story and writing were very good also. I truly enjoyed your work. Thanks.

BEST BEST ... THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ. MUST READ STORY

Every man's fantasy. Tropical island, beautifull women, loads of sex. You get to hunt and fish and shoot the bad guys and get rewarded with even more sex. If I could pick my life this would be it.....thanks again for writing it down.

As a fan of Lost, this story especially resonated with me. I would love to spend time on a place like this with my sweetheart. Although in her mid fifties, she is very beautiful and oh so sexy. To be able to see her wall around naked all the time and be able to have sex with her whenever and wherever we wanted would defintely be a dream come true.

I thought it would be corny but it turned out very erotic. It's just the way i would want to be stranded....

Signed,

Tom Hanks...

I love the fact that it was more then sex it had a good storie. It made me wish i had my own island mmmmm the simple things.

Think you story is great, well paced, the sex scenes are a natural part of the story rather than being just shoved in a place. The idea of the WWII encampment,,FANTASTIC,,

The sunken boat, there is a very simple way to raise the boat if the depth was reachable by free diving. simply start taking bamboo down and attaching it to the boat eventually you will achieve neutral boyancy and it will float..there is an Asian fable about this being done with temple bells

MAYBE IT IS ME...dont know if it is a deliberate action or not, but the care packages should have contained some type of communication system, radios, perhaps a satellite phone some method of charging--eg solar. There will be all sorts of marine radios on the sailboat, just to get it certified for the trip

SO Maybe It Is Me

I started out liking this but then i just felt like i might as well finish it because i was so far into it. Dont get me wrong, it was a good plot. It just lacked suspense and i found it very monotone.

I hope that you will write more chapters to this wonderful story.

Really,really loved it! Hope to read more by you "gearhead".

A wonderfully sensual and enticing adventure, a fantasy that I have always imagined of living on an island. :-)

What's not to like about this story? It flows, swoops, bends and swirls around; always coming back to the center. A work of literary art.

The best story I've ever read on here. A great story. PLEASE write more.

Very few have reached this complete level of storytelling...at it finest. I found the pirate scene a curious addition, but it fell well within the realm of believable and added to the whole. Semper Fi. My congrats. It rates an A+ and you got one from me.

I liked it but wanted to give you a head's up: Pacific Islanders have an impossible time growing vegetables because there are no bees on the islands. I know this from talking with a few of anthropologists that went there.

This is one of my all time favorites. You have a talent!!!

Its 1.30am and i had to read to the end!

Thanks a great read.

Great story, totally enjoyed reading it. Everything was believable. Please keep writing.

I read every page with antisipation and even tear's at times. Surely you must be a renound author. I'm only glad that I was able to read it. Thank You !

One of the best stories I have ever read. Don`t, ever, stop writing!!

Go Hollywood. You are a great writer. Great story.

Realism is one thing that I look for in a story, and that's the only place where this tale has failed. Otherwise, good job, and thanks.

- Hunter

...and that's what's good about it.

The only thing I would add, by way of criticism, is that, if you ever want to flesh things like this out more, take your time with each event, each moment. Imagine it as fully as you can. Add those touches of reality, those touches of story. Write it the way you like, as fantastic as you please. But, more details in each paragraph, full of the things you might actually see and notice if you were there. Not just details for the sake of details, but details to make us feel and imagine it all more fully.

This would be a pretty good book, if you wanted it to be.

Thanks. I enjoyed it.

Holy cow, what a story! Tastefully done and a great reflection of a creative imagination. Sure reads as if it really happened!

~ Jim

It's calm not clam.

Great job! Wonderful combination of fantasy and adventure story, and the sex scenes were exquisetly rendered. Such a variety. One of the best I have read on Literotica.

Action, adventure, and hot sex! Great combination, well done.

What a ride thank you sometimes a story is more than a story and you pulled it off.

Please write more.

Thanks for an amazing story

What a fabulous story. Well done.

I want to be one of the lady and thank him too. Just awesome

This story was great. Probably my favorite plot on the site, simply because of the wonder that it brings. As a man, I really want to be the narrator and live his life. I will say that the actual sex got a little stale, but the plot made it work. It would be nice to have more erotic sex positions, different places, and maybe a threesome. Regardless, you have a gift, and I have a new favorite on the site! Thank you.

Gosh, I loved this story.

It has all the adventure of Hornblower or Obrien's Aubry/Martrin series.

Just Great!

Thanks

If you aren't a professional writer, you should be. You had me in tears on several occasions.

Thank you!

I couldn't stop reading right from the start. Excellent. More new stories in this genre would be great.

I've read a lot of stories on this sight just to get off. This story had me fascinated to read it through. Nice sex, good plot and good character development. I wish the story was book lengthy.

Best story I have read in this website wanted to stop initially but intrigued to continue to find out both the sexual encounters and the eventual outcome of the hero

Very well done

Very engrossing story, could not resist reading all the way through. Great balance of sex and story. Would love to hear what happens next. Is there something at the old ww2 site..

Only comment I've ever posted great story need more series is there something at the site it is killing me with anticipatation for next series encore encore

Have read this a couple of times. Something has always made me curious though. Wondering why Sam and Joann didn't send a radio in the first shipment? Anything can happen, and they could have a semi reasonable chance to call for assistance. Love the concept though. Having your own island paradise. One can only dream. Still a great story.

I know it is a fantasy, but you made it sound very real.

A good read, easy progression chapter by chapter. This will be very hard to beat

Well done author. i hope there is another story from this author.

This is a well-crafted, tight piece of prose. Solid character development, strong descriptive language, and not over-reaching with events make it noteworthy. There is one relatively minor element that I would take the time to address. I say relatively common simply because it so often occurs in so much fiction that its "jarring" aspect is lessened due to its frequency. I'm speaking of the abrupt manner in which you choose to end your chapters. I understand that there should be some of what is to come close to the end of a chapter, but the endings of several of your chapters seem almost "bolted on" in order to get that little bit of what is next. The best example of this is at the end of Page 10. You leave the reader with an image of our hero (and trust me, I LIKE your protagonists even if Becky could use some more personality outside the bedroom) wondering about raising the sunken boat. Period. Full stop. Screeching of brakes, etc.

That is the only real negative I can see in your story, sir, and, throwing all modesty aside, coming from an English teacher of 36 years (and being the professor the kids did NOT want to get), that is high praise. O:-)

Lastly, let me just add my request to that of others, and ask you to both continue writing, and to continue writing THIS story.

The plot was great, I was as immersed in the survival aspect as I was the sex, which is often overdone. Maybe It's because I'm no spring chicken, but there doesn't have to be fucking on EVERY page. Life happens between sex, right?

YOU CERTAINLY HAVE THE GIFT FOR TAKING A SUPERB PLOT AND COUPLED WITH SEX EQUALS GREAT READING. I URGE YOU TO CONTINUE WITH THE TALENT YOU OBVIOUSLY HAVE. HAVING SERVED ON THE ISLAND OF MINDANOA IN THE PHILIPPINES YOU HAVE THE DETAILS GREAT.

FIVE STARS ARE NOT ENOUGH FOR THIS STORY, BUT I CAN SAY THAT IT REALLY IS SUPER!

Truly a great story. Thanks so much for writing it, you have the gift.

Well done. A very good read. You should be published and on stores shelves. Thank you. Please post the continuing adventures

This is just what I have been looking for. A little bit of everything and well written. Is there going to be more?

Thanks great read hope others like it as well

This story was incredible. Although it had a few errors and the cheesy "my hero" every once in a while, it was still an exciting story. Where literotica is concerned it was surprisingly wholesome as much as porn can be. I hope for you to continue this story because Becky still needs to be impregnated. Thank you for the story ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

A very good imaginative and well written story. Thanks!

A find it a nice story to read and enjoy.

It seems unfinished.

Thank you for the story.

This is a great story but only worth four stars because of the lack of an ending