by crimsonandclovr4
Thank you, thank you, thank you. I anticipate coming (ha) back to this again and again. It fits seamlessly with the original Eclipse text, indeed, I think you do that delicate balance between poignancy and awkwardness even better then Stephanie Meyer. Hot + believable = the perfect combination. You're very talented : )
P.S.: Your username makes me wonder if you enjoyed Kristin Stewart in The Runaways as much as I did ; )
really well done and totally believable as a missing chapter, you captured the essence of the characters and the night completely. i agree with the previous post you should of added in after she went to sleep how he tore the pillow apart.
This was great, loved it!
Would of loved it if you added more of the book like the bit where edward bites the pillow ect!! But still it was really good!
I am a huge twiligh fan and love Edward! I was a little disappointed when I first read the books and there was no detail on the nights at Isle Esme. This was great. You really captured how Bella and Edward would each feel while sharing this experience. Not to mention , this got me super hot!
amazing job.im a big edward fan n im soo impressed by your presentation of edwards feelings and reluctant passion.its totally like a chapter from the original book! U ve done a wonderful job! <3 u for it.
I'm a total Twilight fan and really enjoyed this "missing chapter"! The characters were totally the same as in the real books. Great job! Hot!
Not exactly a "parody", it really is more of a "missing chapter". The writer has beautifully captured the angst of Edward and the insecurity and frustration of Bella. Very well done.