All Comments on 'Istanza'

I... I dont get it! It was so great but the betrayal was heartbreaking! The story is hot, sexy, sad and so many other things! But oh my god I can't believe the ending!!

Great story. Wow. Quite the surprise ending, but I really appreciated it. It took what otherwise felt a bit far-fetched and over-sweet and placed it into a darker, grittier world.

That was a awful ending. It isn't over.

should write a sequel. Seriously, this is too good to leave here.

Many writers are guilty of spending too long setting out the back story before entertaining the reader (on this forum, usually with erotica). SlaveMasterUK tends to do the opposite - frontloading the erotica then spending the second half developing a plot.

After some beautiful chapters, this story develops into an ending which is simply unsatisfactory to the extent that I think it would have been better on a collection other than Literotica. However, it was a good read until the ending. I hope the author will return to the site.

V.S.

Mostly I love it but I hate the ending it’s a great cliff hanger if this were to be continued but I doubt it well be