All Comments on 'It Arrives'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Great story

I loved the story.

I would love for my wife to take in this manner.me, she wouldn’t have to tie me down either.

GaucueretGaucueretalmost 10 years ago
Great story....but...

It's in serious need of proofreading. Errors really took me out of it. Otherwise, I liked it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
whoa!

this is hot!

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