All Comments on 'It Been a Long Time'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
What's an organism?

It must be big, whatever it is.

Scotsman69Scotsman69almost 13 years ago
An 'organism' indeed.

Never heard of one of those.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Lovely story but needs some editing, organism being the stand out mistake.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Joann let out a long deep breath, and then scream, as her organism hit her.

Gotta watch them organisms. Vicious little buggers, almost as bad as Chihuahuas.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
organism or orgasm

An organism is a life form. An orgasm is ... Woohoo. :)

caryzfieldcaryzfield4 months ago

How is this Romance? This should be in Erotic Couplings. Decent story, but they should have gotten together in the end

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