All Comments on 'It Just Happened Ch. 11'

I hated Ben at first, he was a jerk. But you've shown another side to him and turned him into a decient guy.

I hope that he does have a future with Millie.

Well first and foremost I love this one. I have to admit I don't have a clue where its going. I thought Ben was about to go on a BDSM power trip a couple of chapters ago. Now he's feeling bad about knocking up his sister-in-law. LOL I think the two sisters planed the pregnancy and Eddy boy is in on it. Well yes I'm probably wrong but its fun guessing. LOL

I guess I'm one of the guys you don't like. one that you rather delete than read. I said that I like your writing but not the characters because the all lack character.

But I would not like you to stop writing here, I personally just need at least one person who is not a complete jerk and is playing all the time with feelings of others just for the fun of it with no thinking.

I think you should not chicken out after your first story. If you don't like the comments, don't allow us to write one. On the other side why are you writing stories ? for yourself ? if not, there is no possible way everybody likes what you write ever. if here ore elsewhere. So I hope I'm seeing more stories of you here. If not to bad.

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of fucking that cheating slut Jen if he never rubs her infidelity in his brothers nose?

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