All Comments on 'It Started in the Rain Ch. 01'

Nicely done. Written with a quality that is seldom encountered here.

Will be looking for the next episode as soon as you finish.

I loved the "taint". A lot of relationships have miracuously evolved with the thoughts on this, especially with mothers consoling their daughters, especially the virgin ones. Yes, please, another chapter. This story has a lot of potential.

Excellent story, setting of the scene & the mood. One of the best stories I've read on this site.

This is love and only love. No conquest, no force, no trickery...just love as it can be. Been there, done that and have only happy memories.

GREAT STORY LOVED ALL OF IT.YOU CAUGHT EVERY EMOTION

this is a work of pure emotion such depth of feeling such a display of imagery cant wait for next installment

Very nice...a talented wordsmith...your story inspires me to imagine myself in this situation!

More, please?

Absolutely Beautiful!

Very nice. Thank you

great story, looking forward to chapter 2.

You put together a great story and to add to it wrote it well. Looking forward to reading part 2.

Too good ! May god bless the writer.

You are very very good !! Yes, a story that is mostly about sex, but we need a good stroke story from time time. However, I can just start to feel the emotion growing, not between an old man and a young woman, but rather two friends who just happen to be a years apart. Very subtle, and very good.

The first time through your stuff I did not have a clear understanding of how to use the site so I did not comment or vote enough -

As old friends LOL I shall do more of both this time through -

Thanks -

and beach blanket bingo prevails. TK U MLJ LV NV

Great start to what promises to be a great story. May-September love can be so exciting. A well thought out and written story and I am looking forward to reading more. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.