All Comments on 'It Started Innocently Enough'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Very hot

Very hot - my butt is throbbing and I am a girl.. I loved this story - thanks so much for writing it.

lennythelionlennythelionalmost 15 years ago
Very plausible

Nice vivid descriptions and a story I could quite imagine one of my friends actually telling me. Well done. To get me to 100 though, I'd have liked to know slightly more how she felt. The bit where she starts to walk up the stairs with him inside her was great - more of that would have been perfect.

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