All Comments on 'It Started On Prom Night Ch. 02'

no where as good as the first chapter seems rushed and the mom gave in way to easy. what you wrote here should have been spread out over weeks not 24hrs. as said before get a good editor and do a rewrite. remember to always do it right or not at all.

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love this story and hope you write some more please. Shame to stop here just when the action is getting good and looking like Jack and Jackie want to be a couple.