All Comments on 'It Started Out Innocently Enough'

Story was GREAT........Got Me Hard And Pumping And CUMMING !! !

Wish I Had A Sister Like This !!

Wish This had Been A True Story !!

I really liked your story. Definatelly made me wish I had a sister, particulary one like her.

This story was fantastic! it had me cumming hard. Thanks for a brilliant read.

Wish my sister had been this hot.

Wish my sister had been this hot.

Enjoyed the story very much. You see my sister and I are a year apart in age and therefore are very attracted to each other. Ten years ago when I was 38 and sis was 37, while my parents were in France on vacation my sister and I ended up in our barn together. It had been our practice for the previous 10 to 15 years to sleep together whenever possible but never did we have sex until then.

Excellent Story!! Although it could have done with a little bit more detail ;)

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this story sucked

Well written story. Looking forward to the next one.

wankers is the right word too, how can people say HOT STORY, YOU HAD ME CUMMIN hahaha i laffed at them responses

It was a short story thats been written with the slight style change and diff characters a thousand times before this, it's basically a 3-5 minute copy through read and it was rubbish

If you seriously "cum" from this you must either be a premature ejaculator or just a cock

a group of us went on a nightout come end of the evening everyone pair off leaving me and my brother i said to him i feel like been nauthy i was feeling horney i went to the bartroom took my nickers off when i came back i took his hand and give him a feel of my bum and rub his front he got hard i give him a full on kiss i un zip him sat on his lap and fuck him in the pub we later fuck at home now we dont care if dont have a date

You do not waste time! That is the art of the good writer.... grab the readers attention and do not let go. Well done!