All Comments on 'It was a Night Out (In)'

Delicious

I want to be friends with these people. I hope they stick around.

You did a good job getting these two into bed now the hard parts comes, keeping them together. Is he just "part of the adventure", or is there more for these two? Can he overcome his poor self image and learn to be who he is and will she be willing to empower him to do this? 5 stars

You have a good start to a good story here. Lets see if you can do more with it.