All Comments on 'It was a Wonderful Day'

My fantasies are often very similar to this story. You write very well, and I hope you continue. Thanks.

I have had this beach/pool fantasy for some time. I never saw the story that really addressed all my turn ons (all in one story anyway). They include; exhibitionism, cock rings, sex in public, oil, playing with a couple, big cocks, enemas, anal play (fisting) and cum drinking.

I would like to read more comments about how the story could be improved.

Thanks.

Jimbo12

Nice one, keep writing :)