All Comments on 'It's All in the Mind Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Rousing start!

Well begun! Rave on.

JackLuisJackLuisover 14 years ago
Nicely done

Almost incest? Well the delusions of a twisted mind are always fun to read. Sequel?

MaiDawtonsMaiDawtonsover 14 years ago
good read!!!

I loved the reluctant hero and his reward was more than fitting!!! Look forward to reading more of your work!

PAUL CPAUL Cover 14 years ago
very good

well plotted and well written.

i enjoyed it.

well worth anybodies time to read.

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