by CLB
Not bad, but the plot (husband thinks wife has forgotten his birthday, only to find that she has arranged a threesome with the next door neighbor -- who just happens to also be a very good friend of hers) has been done so often that this is the equivalent of a paint by numbers set. OK for a first attempt, but try something a little more original next time.
this story is every guys fream birthday. it beats the hell out of a new golf shirt any day.
Who was so critical does not have a better story of his own to point to with pride
I'd hope maybe one day my husband would give me a birthday present like that.. with another man of course!!!!