All Comments on 'It's Never Too Late'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
A heartwarming love story

Thank you.

Please write more like this, only longer if possible.

Socially_IneptSocially_Ineptover 13 years ago
Awww!

This was a very nice story. I'm glad they finally got together.

I'm glad you wrote it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
wow

what a shock. you can write a really good story ! give a bit more effort (short and years gone by with no explanation)compared to your other lengthy stories and then you can forget what you wrote before. this one had it all in it. passion , love , sex and high emotions but as I said just a bit short. but good.

DanielQSteele1DanielQSteele1over 13 years ago
Loved it!

I've not read any of your stuff so I have no idea what your stories are generally like, but I have to admit I loved this one. It's grown up, moving, sweet. Just a good all around story. I can sympathize with his inability to get back with her, or move on. But sometimes you have to decide if moving on is worth letting go of a legitimate hurt. He did what he had to do. If you can't let somebody go after six years, you're gone.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
good story

Good story, although I personally feel a paragraph is missing at the end. It ends a bit too abruptly.

MrVdogMrVdogabout 12 years ago
Oh Brother.

And three weeks after we returned from our honeymoon, Don dropped in and took her out for a little reminiscing... Jen was nice enough to let me have sloppy seconds later, after Don left. We are SO HAPPY...

Dubby49Dubby49over 11 years ago
No Better

How is Dennis any better than other guys who knock up a girl and bolt.

Jennifer keeps her child a secret from till she needs him.

According to the timeline, Dennis bolted 10 years ago. He reconciles with Jennifer 3 1/2 years ago. Why did it take him so long to get married.

Also Jennifer says 6 1/2 years after the breakup that she hadn't had sex for 3 years. So, if she was screwing around for 3 1/2 years after the breakup, why did she suddenly stop?

Little inconsistencies like these spoil an otherwise passable piece of fluff.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
IT NEVER IS

unless you dont know and then its possible. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
What a Bitch

She's caught bragging about cheating at a party then keeps the guys daughter a secret for years. WTF.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
One of the worst lines ever

"You have to earn that right. Right now you just happen to be the sperm donor from the past."

And your the deceptive cunt that kept him from his daughter. He should sue for custody, anyone this sick in the head shouldn't be a parent.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
what was her excuse

I liked it. There is a but! I can't believe how much she did wrong to this man. It hurts to read this story! If it's shock and awe. Yes you've done that. Please write another sequel please explaining why she said and done hiding from him his own daughter, also why she said and did what she said at that party(if that makes sense) love you all! Bye. Greg

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
more than likely

she screwed the same guy she cheated with three years before the reconciliation. once a cheater..... she could have let him know a 1000 ways he had a daughter

auhunter04auhunter04almost 8 years ago
False Pride

False Pride like false ego makes foolish people

here we have to people too full of pride to be honest with themselves and each other.

He could have at least listened to a phone call

She could have written a letter

SampkyangSampkyangover 7 years ago
I would help my daughter

BUT pass on the cheating SLUT!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
OH GOODIE!!!

another FUCKING wimp story. she FUCKING bragged about fucking another...WIMP!!!

Bish08Bish08about 5 years ago
Good story

But I find something always gets overlooked in these stories. Why is it ok for the mother never to tell the father about having a child. I'd be furious if I was never told

Rancher46Rancher46over 3 years ago

Wonderful story, it is to bad in the story he failed to listen to Jennifer's pleas, if he had he would have learned about their daughter. At least 6 years later they found the still existing undying love and got hopefully that happily ever after. 5 stars

Wandering_MinstrelWandering_Minstrelalmost 2 years ago

I find this story unrealistic. Given the way he treated Jennifer and the time it took him to figure out what he wanted even after seeing her again, I can't imagine a woman would be willing to ever trust him.

This guy couldn't even do the math and realize that he was quite likely the father of her child. She should have looked at him and walked away. That child deserves a real father not this self-centered guy who sent mom away in a stupid fit of anger.

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