All Comments on 'It's Okay'

Having my wife encourage me to have gay sex in front of her was so emasculating but erotic. Love this hot story

Ok. Sick fuck that I am I loved this story.

My views/opinions on individual issues:

1) what was the Ruth/darrins end goal? They’d been fucking for a year and lying to him. They must have talked about getting caught. Only in this case they got lucky because he went to Darrin his best friend. So, why did they wait if they wanted him to be part of Ruth/darrins relationship? It doesn’t seem like they wanted to toss him humiliated out the door. If this is a last minute plan and they hadn’t planned on “honey” finding out, why try this?

2). What is there in the background to make them think that Honey was so bi/submissive that he’d enjoy this? She kept telling him it would be ok and acting as if she gave a shit.

3). If she really gave a shit what was with the threaten to beat him up or kill him? They had to realize that he might not accept this. Was their plan always to hurt/kill him if he didn’t cooperate?

4) did they plan on telling the police they were surprised by the husband and defended themselves? Unless Darrin gave Honey a stolen weapon the non-functioning weapon traces back to Darrin quickly. Wouldn’t look too good for ruth/darrin if Darren already knew about the weapon. Sounds like a planned killing.

5) how do they plan to make sure that he doesn’t go to police? He could be faking acceptance to keep from being injured. Once the sex is over people’s minds change. Tomorrow he might want to kill them.

6) how could any of them trust each other? Ruth/Darrin cheated on him for a year. They both raped him. While Darrin started out nice, he changed it up to hurtful tucking and humiliation. Honey himself had a full paragraph about how Darrin did this just to humiliate Honey. So, Honey should never trust them. They raped him and he had definitely threatened them prior to actually going there. I would never trust a guy I’d put through that. He could wait a while and poison them both or kill them in their sleep?

7) who is she with now? While she’s been sleeping with Darrin it doesn’t seem like he’s been looking to be number one or at home with them. So is he just their Bull?

8) what kind of friendship would Honey/Darrin have now? It’s hard to be normal when you’ve been raped by the guy. I know this one. I was raped by a good family friend. Said no and got off. Avoided him for years. Eventually were friends again but it took work. Consent is a real issue. I’ve just recently come to understand how that formed who I am and why consent is such an issue in every interaction I have.

9) once Ruth/Darrin knew about the plan of Honey why did they wait? Maybe to humiliate him by having his plan go so bad? Darrin as a gun nut should have known that no matter how well planned that any interaction with a gun has potential to go to shit. Even when it’s with your helpless friend. What if honey had added to the plan without telling Darrin?

10). What is the overall plan going forward? Do they toss him out and depend upon humiliation keeping him from police/revenge? I’m sure the percentage of raped males reporting their rapes is even lower than the female level. Especially since this would become an issue at work too. Since Ruth mostly seemed to love honey and Darrins cock do honey/Ruth become a sub couple to Darrins bull/Dom? Does honey just become a cuck? Based on most cuck stories the cuck isn’t usually shown love.

My personal thoughts:

1). Honey should have test fired the weapon. Basic gun safety practice. Even though he didn’t plan to fire any interaction with a gun is problematic. Would have changed everything.

2) the old lady neighbor made it clear the lover brought his car over. So, honey should have wondered what was up when he realized someone was there. Why no car? It becomes obvious that he would have known Darrins car.

3) Stockholm syndrome’s bullshit and has a very low instance if it does occur. This seems more like a severe sub reaction that can’t be depended to last when the rational mind returns after sex.

4). honey couldn’t be sure what their plan was for him after ruth/Darrin were done in light of the threat of severe beatings and shootings. That’s usually not something done by people who have your interests at heart. In honey’s place I would assume bad things in light of the threat. In which case, beat me or kill me. It’s likely to be hard to cover up. So try to walk out. If they don’t want to injure me I can. If they beat me bad enough they have to get me to the hospital. If they shoot me it’s likely to be heard and if not killed we are back to the hospital. It also supposes that the wife who has shown some degree of potentially fake affection is truly prepared to kill her husband. If she hated him that much he’d already be gone.

5). Honey should leave no matter what. I came during my rape. It was still a rape and I couldn’t trust that rapist for a long time. How can you stay if you have no trust? At least honey learned that cock is cool.

An impressive piece of writing. I found the content more than a little distasteful, but I can only admire the author's execution.

Talent is talent whether or not we like where the talent leads.

LA

Well. I read this story on the recommendation of another author. I probably wouldn't have found it on my own because I avoid "Nonconsent," and I don't like the rape aspects, either. But holy cow, it is so well written! The submission-and-acceptance aspects, the internal monologue in the narrator's head. I gave it a 5 for those aspects, despite my distaste for part of the plot.

This should be on the "fucked up bullshit"

category...Not worth a vote.

DOL

Again with the rape. What is wrong with you people?

This was in the revenge category. Totally wrong.

well written but would never happen. part way thru the BJ a hard fist to his balls would be delivered

Even if the hubby decided he liked men and was gay or bi now.... I would be packing the first chance I could and be looking for a new woman or man.

Crap

Really asinine story like you can force a heterosexual to become gay.

Dumb story.

Abusive crap

I know it's only fiction but I am waiting for a story where when a guy puts his cock into an unwitting husband's mouth the husband just bites down.

To the author, Cynalot- You have some very tough critics! I would have enjoyed another chapter where hubby does get revenge vs turning in a bi-cuck pussy. I enjoyed your writing unfortunately, he never got to screw his wife again just the "clean up boy"!

It's a horrible story of abusive manipulation by the wife and boyfriend. The story finishes in a completely unrealistic manner. He was raped, do you really think men or women who are raped, enjoy it?

how fuckin pathetic

This was one of the hottest stories I’ve ever read. The best part was her comforting him during. I have fantasized about this many times. To the people that don’t like the story, I think the direction was pretty clear from the beginning. Why keep reading?

It's interesting that some of the commentators who hate this story accuse the author (that would be me) of being sick and then go on to offer their thoughts on what the central character *should* have done--actions that are vile beyond belief. It leads one to think that they're very insecure in their sexuality and they feel the need to display their macho credentials. (It's another matter, one I've commented on earlier, that these critics often can't spell or write coherent sentences.)

So why didn't the dumb fuck grab the pistol during the wife's orgasm and shot them both? Best moves would have been clock her in the face and shot him in the groin, use their tie both at the foot of the bed,cut off his cock and balls feed the to her, cut her face off and flush it. Then go to the ER get a rape kit done.

And I can flat out say this one is the worst of the worst.

Wish I had read the comments first. They pointed out how much this story sucked.

SOME SICK SHIT. WAS WAITING FOR HIM TO BUST OUT OF HIS SUBMISSIVE MODE AND SHOT SOME PEOPLE! STORY SUCKED, hahahaha!

its by far the most horrific degenerate story i've read. Not a single line passed without the feeling of anger and disgust. Death to everyone involved

from cyanlot. this guy was simply a fool, completely unprepared.

So yes, this is a story about rape, in all of its forms, both physically and emotionally. You have here one sad bastard, getting betrayed by the two closest persons in his life, in the most heinous way imaginable. No way did either one of those people ever loved him in any significant way - the initial betrayal was bad enough... but this? This prove that neither Ruth or Darrin are actually human.

... Or does it?

'Cause, let's be frank here, given the way the unnamed husband eventually became a willing participant to his ordeal, his wife and/or his best friend most have known, in some way, how much in the closest he must have been. I mean, we've all watched "Oz", haven't we? So we're all in agreement that, if someone jackass tried to prove to the cheating slut we had the misfortune to marry that you are a little cuck boy by raping you, then ask, at gunpoint, to suck his dick full of shit... Sure, you accept to do so, but, the second jackass is losing it and the slut pay more attention to the blowjob that to the gun she has, you then TAKE A BIT OUT OF CRIME, if youknowhatimsayin, right? So, the fact that the MC here didn't bite his nemesis' dick off, and didn't knocked out his stunned wife immediately afterward, to get back his self-respect, and instead submit to his tormentors... it made it pretty clear he was gay all along. By the way, same goes with Darrin - fucking a man to prove dominance is basically prison mentally, but, when you're outside? Yeah, you're gay. Or, at the very least, extremely bi. Which makes you wonder about Ruth, in all of that - what happened if Darrin and her husband keep having those mind-blowing orgasms together, without her being involved at all? They hang out together, drink beer together, watch sport together, now fuck together... who's become the third wheel there? Great vengeance, lady - you set yourself up to lose BOTH of the guys you were fucking! Genius plan...

Anyway... for what it was, this story was quite repulsive. LIT suggests it with one of the LW stories I read recently. I wasn't expecting the MC's complete abdication to his faith, which seriously made me want to vomit - that, him giving himself away like a true pussy, was the most revolting thing about this story, way more so than even the gay sex, which, sorry, I'm simply not into (not that there's anything wrong with it...) I should have took the time to summarily check Cyanlot's other efforts, which would have told me pretty much what I should expect here. But I didn't. And I definitely paid the price for it. At least, I now learned my lesson... 👎🏾

He should report it to the police, and if nothing happens, wreak some vengeance on them both. I like hot stories of reluctant men turned, but THIS IS NOT ONE OF THEM!

Is there really a readership for this? I kept hoping he would get the opportunity to get the loaded gun and shooting Darrin's dick off and ramming it into his wife's cunt and emptying it there. Don't worry about me reading any more of your shitty stories. My last stop at your cesspool.

Even its a fantasy it shows how low your brain works!!!

This story sucks. It needs to be relocated to cuck/bi-male.

Hey, guys. About this being in "non-consent", instead of in gay male or other category

Literotica kinds of shift your stories around, disregarding the category you put it in first place. I don't know why, but it happens.

Maybe someone who read it in the original category (gay male?) reported it to Literotica as being in fact non/consent (what kind it is).

Anyway, that story could be also in category "Loving Wives" or "Fetish", where you can find tons of cuckold reluctant bi stories like this one.

Categories is not that much specific. That's why I usually check the tags before reading a story.

This, is not a revenge story. This is a bi-cuck story

Man, the hostile remarks here. Geez guys, get a life. So maybe it should be in Gay but it was definitely Non Consent. Give the author a break. Most of his stories are in Gay just so you sissies in hiding don't get upset. You probably sneak over to the Gay section most of the time anyway.

Good work Cyanlot. Fun story.

If I read a really hot story, I always look at the list of other stories by the Author. Sometimes, if I read a really lame story, I do the same check. This Author is a big ZERO and I was not surprised to see the majority of his stories were in the Gay Male category. Only a queer can fuck up a married couple plus wife's lover story. This Author should avoid trying to write anything else and go find a glory hole.

This is called "rape". This is then called "Jail time after a trip to the hospital and a rape kits been applied". This is then suing the rapist for everything he is worth. This is having the wife arrested and going to jail as an accessory.

HE HAD THE POWER TO STOP THIS RAPE ONCE HE HAD HIS DICK IN HIS MOUTH BITE DOWN HARD AND NOT LET GO

Only pervert shit written by a pubescent teen or an ugly old bag!!! Maybe you are a pervert gay!!!!

It was not at all okay. The both need to be hurt,badly

Another piece of shit...

This is a fictional piece I presume. It came from the Author's imagination. We all read it to the end for some reason. Erotic literature is just flat compelling. I have read and considered so many of the comments, good and otherwise, and really don't get too upset about it. The Writer has an imagination!

Two thoughts:

1) Your story was erotic to me, and

2) Those who commented otherwise and verbally tried to belittle you ...

Why'd you read the story if it didn't interest you from the start? Sounds like

y'all are in serious denial. Maybe you should shut your mouths until you're ready

to put want your really want into it...

You have to be the worl lowest faggot!!! Maybe you are gay and that is your way to keep on with your lechery!!! Maybe you are only an idiot who needs mental help!! I don`t know what is worse!!!

Boy I can tell you're a real man aren't you ? Now your just a gay cuckold. don't write any more stories maybe just hang yourself.

I'd love to have my wife do that to me. She already knows I want to watch her with guys but tells me she is too shy. I dream of my wife having a bf or bf's. And she has me suck them with her. Has them fuck me . I'd love to chat with others like myself or women who like guys like me. I'm on yahoo using the same name or kerry8866@hotmail.com.

and just had to come back and say how mean you anonymous people are. Have you ever tried giving yourself to a man. It is the most wonderful thing in the world, feeling a man in you. Knowing you are the reason he will be climaxing.

My wife and I had been swapping with our friends when one night she wanted a 3 some. MMF my best friend joined us after I watched them fuck as I lay beside her she asked me to eat her. I am crazy for oral so without thinking I went down on her, while I was eating her he came up behind me and spread my cheeks and before I could stop him he was in me. At first I was so embarrassed but soon I was actually moaning. My wife crawled out from under my face and held my hand as he fucked me. She did like this wife and cooed to me and talked to me like I was girl. Before the night was over I sucked his cock . We had many MMF after that with most of the guys in the sub division. She would have ffm but I never got to go with any of the other women once they knew their husbands had fucked me. They treated me as if I was a wife also.

to offset the asshole of LIT's 1 vote

You have to be the worst of the worst perverted fuck on the planet!!!!

to offset the asshole of LIT's 1 vote!!

After 3 paragraphs it was too bad to finish.

To the anonymous poster and asked this question, the answer is: obviously not someone who cannot spell, punctuate, or write a coherent sentence.

what person gets off on this shit if this happened to me they would they would of found them both with a bullet in there head

Several people have commented that if the victim of the rape were a woman there would be nothing to comment on – standard porn with a non-consent edge. We know that most rapes happen within marriages and most go unreported. People – women and men - acclimatise to the violence and live on hoping to avoid it in the future. Horrible but true. This is what this story tells. The fact that a man can enjoy being fucked in the arse is pretty uncontroversial too. Cyanlot is also a far better writer than most people on this site. The story actually looked at the conflict in the situation and had some tension in it. A brilliant story and very erotic.

you will never stop the LW cuck stories because there are to many people who like them. But don't worry they all hate you!!!! Gave it a 5

It's rape pure and simple and his wife and boyfriend are going to jail - IF they make it that far. Many men would simply get a gun and put them in a deep graver where they belong. Relax my ass. ANd if Darrin was stupid enough to put his cock in his mouth, he would have bitten it off. Lets see the cocksucker rape anyone else with no dick. In any case wifey gets the crap beaten out of her. Terrible story of violence, rape and abuse.

UNO ESTRELLA, EUNUCO CABRON

Excellent story of cuckold husband accepting his place. And that is just the first night of training for cuckold. Soon he will be locked in chastity so he not jerking off and always horny. His balls getting blue as he drips and leaks his goo in the panties he now wears for underpants. He will suck and swallow and clean his wife's stretched pussy and ass. And his wife will see to it that hubby is introduced to the glory holes, sucking off strangers and letting strangers fuck and breed his pussy through the hole. As the wife and lover supervise. And wife will start loaning cuckold out to hung she males who will also use him for a small fee. Cuckold will be very happy in his new life.

No one, not even under these circumstances, rolls over for something like rape. They may give up the fight for the moment when defeated. But in the long run? He's going to get dressed and go to the hospital. The hospital did a rape kit and called the Police. Darrin's DNA, the drugs in his system, his wife's fingerprints on the gun (the Police searched the house) sends his soon to be ex-wife and Darrin to jail for years and years. Rape, sodomy, illegal restraint, illegal drugs and assault and battery guarantee they spent at least 15 years in jail. Your ending, even for fiction, was ridiculous and unbelievable. Complete and utter drivel and not worth the time spent reading it.

My wife's ex-lover conquered me in a similar way. He still demands servicing from time to time now, although they don't see each other any longer. Its a humiliation and control thing, he knows he is alpha male and enjoys keeping me in my place.

I'm a woman & I loved the idea of the woman being in control. It's so easy to have the man be the dominant, but to give it to the woman is unique & sexy.

Are you kidding me?!!

Even if it meant the death penalty, both of these two mother fuckers would either be dead very shortly, (on the same day), or they'd be in jail with the husband suing both of them for pain and suffering.

This shit is fucked up!

I've read several of your stories now, and I have to say that your ability to vary your subject matter to the extent that I've felt I was reading different authors is no small feat! The structure and scenarios that you create are always imaginative and interesting. I hope that you continue to entertain us with more fantasies in the very near future.

posting garbage like this... what a sad statement for the gay community that so many of their people are mentally disturbed.

Any straight man would kill the both of them, you are a real slime ball.

I'm sorry, but I didn't like it. I'm a woman, but I hate to see a woman humiliate a man in such a manner. It would be one thing if he wanted to do it himself, but to be forced to do it by her and the man she has been cheating with...

I don't like "real" rape stories(the subject was really raped and not just playing hard to get) but I think I could have liked it if there was actual "reluctance" and it happened just been between the men, but I feel like she had already humiliated him enough by sleeping with his best friend...and in their bed!

I have to agree with some of the other commenters. If this had been a woman being set up for rape by the husband and his best friend or husband and his lover, these cavemen would have been telling you how hot this story was. After all this is in the correct category. They came here looking for rape...just not involving two men.

When I was first coming to grips with my desire to be penetrated, this is the sort of fantasy that I would have to get over the idea of getting fucked. I could only get to the point of penetration if it was against my will. They were some of my strongest fantasies.

Totally unbelievable crap that you would think he would be okay with being anally raped and forced to suck a man's cock. Even for a fictional story. He had all the evidence he needed to send them to jail for a VERY long time. Her fingerprints are on the gun, Darrin's semen is in his abused ass. A simple trip to the hospital and a phone call to the police and they're in prison. No self-respecting man with even a shred of pride would do anything less. At the most a man would plot to kill them, painfully. What a crock of shit that you ended this story with his acceptance of being raped. This is one story that makes me wish I could write worth a damn. I'd write a sequel without your permission and I guarantee you that Ruth and Darrin would not walk away scott free.

I kinda liked you're story.

Bullshit! Total and utter BULLSHIT!

Wait. Plan. A divorce and revenge. No way the husband lets his wife's betrayal stand!

He says he hates his back stabbing best friend, but when being forced to clean Darrin up why didn't he just reach up and crush his balls? Everyone in this story is an oozing fistula. Why does our writer "Cylut" want to create the perfect humiliation story? Is this a new type of bad humor?

And then a couple of weeks later, kill both the assholes.

and too chicken shit to retaliate. TK U MLJ LV NV

Rather than agree

The wimp should have picked up the gun right after servicing his "Wife". Shoot the bastard. Then call the police. "I just got raped by my wife's lover, so I shot him". The evidence is already overwhelming. DNA and tie ropes. Let her explain what happened.

Or better yet, while "Cleaning" Darrin, he should have grabbed his nuts and crushed them while biting his penis off. Ouch!!!

No self respecting man would have put up with this shit.

Ya think I'm in the "Burn the bitch crowd?"

Divorce the bitch as soon as you can. Just get up and leave when shes asleep. File the divorce-and make sure the other spouse knows also. That'll teach both bastards.

Guess it's too much to ask for a guy that isn't a 2-D, emotionless drone.

That was seriously hot and well written. Not sure about the other posters, I just hope this was wrongly categorized for a while and they feel shame for getting off on it.

This story actually encouraged me to ask my boyfriend if I can fuck him in the ass lol

This story planted the seed

Anyway,

for all those guys who are calling the author (not sure if your a guy or girl haven't checked your profile) a sick fuck:

This is called: NON CONSENT/ RELUCTANCE

In real life, no rape is no funny, but this is fantasy. So in all reality, it makes YOU sick fucks for coming on here to read about women being raped.

If you approve of a woman being raped in fantasy, then a MAN can be raped in fantasy.

If you don't like it, well that's just too damn bad.

End of story.

Anyway, keep writing

evidence was in his asshole, call the police get tested and get both of them in jail, simple

Sheeze! Do you swaggering homophobic gasbag critics even understand the concept of fantasy?

Cyanlot: keep writing things like this. You have a great creative talent that stretches the imagination.

I don't understand all the hate, you delivered what was desired, gay forced sex... anyone who reads this and comments negatively shouldnt be reading stories in this category. It was a very erotic story, well done :)

do not listen to these dumb fucks who are browsing the NC/R category then find one that involves two males. ignorant neanderthals. I have not posted any stories on the site yet, but to have authors that have a bunch stories all ranked 3.0 or below, to criticize someone's skill?

no one cares about your opinion if all you say is "eww you're a queer!", or "you should kill yourself!" Shows how uneducated and pathetic some people are. Great story and keep up the writing!

Go back to your fucking gutter and stay there

Wimp

I can't believe all these people are freaking out. I mean rape is ok but gay rape...OMGWTF! Sounds like some people are having a little trouble handling their insecurities.

...to have to perpetrate than those who don't like your stupid story are inferior to those that like it.(And your "professor" should be fired for denying valid criticism.)-Without an iota of premise for his "transformation" the story is nothing but a gay man's fantasy with little rational tension and absolutely zero meaning.

I'm not into rape scenarios, myself, but I find it interesting and powerfully written.

I love how dumb some of the commenters are... when the writer is INTO forced gay sex, do you really think that some inane comment saying this is an autobiography will actually insult him? hahaha retards.

autobiography

story of the author his life

I once talked with a college teacher about student evaluations she had received. She said that she prefers that everyone likes her classes. But, she said, when they don't, she takes some consolation in the fact that those who liked the course were articulate, thoughtful, and insightful while those who didn't like the course were, though clearly displeased, were completely inarticulate and sometimes barely comprehensible.

It's too bad that some people found this story so disturbing and threatening. But, when I compare the expressive powers of those who liked it with those who hated it, I have to conclude, "It's Okay!"

Cyanlot

I did not expect that, what a wimp!

It's not the writer who is pathetic but all these people who cannot handle GAY SEX OMGGG. If you disliked this story so much why did you read it right to the end? Did the urge to leave a negative comment come from your own sexuality being confronted,perhaps? Get over it for christs sake.

Stop writing--if that what you call it--and get help.

...get a grip. It's about something you don't like. The internet is full of stuff like that. That's why you have a back button. Use it.

Cyanlot: This kind of 'resigned consent' story is difficult to pull off, no matter what the mix of genders is. You did it really well. I hope you write more. Ignore the haters.

are you ready to take your own life? I bet you are. This story is just sad and pathetic testimony to your own to your own mental health issues and your own ridiculous life. You wrote a story that included EVERYTHING un-healthy and sick and NOTHING sexy, erotic or healthy. You're simply a loser.

Now they have sneeked into loving wifes. It seems that we heterosexuals are being pushed out!

Kwasia oooo kwasia!

If this was a story where a female forced another female into submission no-one would blink twice. But yet all stories that involve any male on male have to be in the gay section? Get a grip... just because male/male isn't something YOU enjoy doesn't mean you have to show how pathetic you are in your inability to deal with how some people DO enjoy it.

By the way... this story is a written expression of a sexual FANTASY, not something the writer thinks would actually happen in reality, you fucking morons. Women who get raped don't end up enjoying it either.

Anyway... male/male isn't something I normally go for but I quite enjoyed this story. Bit of a soft ending but good overall.

When a sick male writer into male humiliation exhibits his predilection for self disrespect that is what turns readers off no matter how well written.<P>

It is the subject not how talented the writer is.<P>

Get some help sick writer.

This should have been in gay section. Then you might receive a decent rating. But your story line is so bad. That someone will have to write a ending for your story because you did not. Good luck on future stories although you should find another site. Oh!!! is this a auto-biography.