All Comments on 'It's Raining Men Pt. 01'

Chris

I liked your style or writing, and the almost casual attitude toward sex that you allow your Character to speak with. I assume the rest of the storm will cum in the ensuing chapter(s). I also assume that our girl will have 'a few good men' in the storm and I am looking forward to seeing how this goes. Thanks for an enjoyable read and for the promise of what may be to come. - Kevin

Liked the writing, seemed like we were listening in on her unfiltered thoughts. Found some of her musings so funny. Looking forward to her further adventures.

The feminine voice is so refreshing for this site, and the uncertainty of the quest for rightful sexual identity and pleasure is all the more erotic. Lovely skilled writing. All the details of inner voice musings really do support the erotic suspense. Don't think I have ever read a female voice describe a man's balls with such candor and fascination.

Your speaker's vulnerability and good humor illustrate that unlike the common saying rediscovering sex is more difficult than riding a bicycle.

This is an honestly and beautifully written story of reconnecting with self and life. I hope you continue the tale with the same maturity and sense of discovery and wonder.

The female perspective is so genuine and arousing. Please keep writing

Enjoyed that! Partly amusing (I actually 'lolled' at one point!), but also erotic and stimulating. Very realistic, too, I would think...thanks for writing it, and look forward to more episodes.....

No guilding the lily. An intriguing introduction to a woman's re-discovery of sex. Now for Ch 2....

That felt so authentic! It is great writing, and it made the story much more real for me. I also was delighted in the random thoughts -- thinking of her daughter, what's on the news .. you've given us insight into the mind of a complex, real woman.