All Comments on 'It's The Way You Look At Me Ch. 12'

another 5 star for me.

This story, is amazing, the 1st thing i do every morning is to open the site and read your story.

I know that this story will end someday, but i hope you will keep it a long way!!!

Good job sir, or lady, you are amazing

Please dont stop its way to great to stop

This is by far one of the best series going. You have done your football research well it seems. The love making is sometimes gentle yet sometimes hard, but not over the top. Keep up the good work. TBC

Please keep this story going, i need more of this !

thank you...

Another Fantastic chapter. Can' wait to see what tomorrow brings. Thank you

Another great chapter. Look forward to seeing the next one. I'm not too sure about the occasional "puss". Just my opinion, doesn't really fit with the way the story has been sounding for so long.

When i first started reading this i thought it a little cliched, but you've moved beyond that into a truly believable story, not as in oh ya i could believe this can happen but as in this DOES happen, these emotions are universal(assuming you have found the right one). And the sex is incredably realistic, none of that tied up and beaten or just straight missionary stuff, you find a perfect balance between "making love" and "fucking" with it alternating between hard and regular, too many stories take the sexuality out of it for that quick spank.

My COUPLE of only complaints are more personal preference rather than a commentary on the story;

1. the use of the word "cunny" is over the top and way way to repeated, throw in a puss, pussy, cunt, ect. in there, even say "in her" hell say sex or something,

2. my god use the word god, not gawd, not gosh, or something else.

I really am loving the story so far but once he played Pittsburgh my nfl team and won it hurt a little down inside but I love the story keep it up

it is a good story so far maybe reduce the amount of times you use cunny

I love it so far, but he's been asked if he wanted to put in her ass and he keeps turning it down! Why?

Football and sex....you bored me to tears. Seriously, what about the rest of the story? This was probably the worst chapter so far. 2/5