All Comments on 'I've Been Set Up Ch. 01'

So, do Jake and Jackie have a prior history?

Looks like Jake is going to be busy for a couple of weeks. I have the feeling that Jackie and her girls have been together sexually, and I hope that Jake has history being sexual with his sister too.

It will be sweet to read.

I'll be watching for the next chapter.

Thanks for the read

Another great start to another great story... GLAD TO HAVE YOU WRITTING AGAIN... love it so fat

I hate cliff hangers .That said it has done what you intended and made me eager for the next chapter

...this was good, but!

BUT, it's not a great idea to say your character is a writer, then proceed to litter the story with incorrect spelling, punctuation and grammar.

However I shall eagerly await the next installment.