All Comments on 'Ivy Cottage'

5 out of 5

To say this is a great story is not really good enough because this story is so much more. Although I wish you went into more with the ending of the story, but, over all this story is just perfect.

I don't see how you can improve this story. Only perhaps pen another tale in the same vein. Can't wait for your next story

Warmest Regards Jim

To say I love it is not strong enough to express my sweet joy after reading it just now. I wish for more from you; you are a really talented writer.

a beautiful, silly, funny, lighthearted story that does not make you feel any pain or sorrow as you read through it. thank you for writing it.

Mondrift's romantic stories, no matter how improbable fill my heart with joy.

This wasn't the run of the mill story. There was a bit too much of the dreary real life aspect to it given the length of the story. I mean, unless you intended to continue on with a detailed telling of their lives together, why bother going into all the inner turmoil? A bit of that is fine (in fact necessary), but, if the story rushes to an ending soon after, why did I need to know all of the guy's deep thoughts? I'd rather have had more erotic sex scenes in place of that.

The elements of: her choice to get a child from their union independently; their age difference; breast feeding; her sexual assertiveness and her practical nature were all great to read about. Her nephew was a bit of an ass, still, we had to have some uncertainty I guess. Thanks for a good read.

What a horrific woman to have to spend one's life with

You write, usually, excellent stories, but I have noticed that many of them end too quickly. It's as though you can't quite work out how to give them an ending, so you just seem to cut them off. This is such a pity. This story was absolutely superb until about 3 or 4 sentences from the end (before the epilogue) when it just stopped! PLEASE do think more about how you end your stories, and give the endings the same care that you give to the beginnings and the main narrative.

I prefer thinking the best, take the positive outlook. Then if things are not as they seem you will always have time to be hurt then.

THEN - AS USUAL - YOU TURN THE MAN IN TO AN ASSHOLE - WHY - I WANT TO BE ENTERTAINED WITH ROMANCE AND LOVE NOT SHIT - STORIES ARE VERY FORMULAIC - USING SAME (TIRED) PHRASES AND WORDS - NEED TO BE MORE IMAGINATIVE.....

but then he turned in to a complete plonker....she should have kicked his sorry ass out and then for someone better to breed with....men are such arrogant ass holes thinking they know it all when in fact they know shit all.......no wonder women become fuck slut whores and go spreading it about because their jerks of men cannot cope.....

but what a pathetic asshole he is....I bet when he first screwed the vicars wife he was not backwards at coming forwards...but feels she is a bitch when she stands in the bathroom...what a total plonker...get your head from up your arse you twonk....

Wonderfully British and very well written! Thank you for sharing this with us!

What a lovely story. 5 stars