All Comments on 'Jack and the Rollercoaster Ch. 08'

by Kezza67

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bruce22bruce22over 15 years ago
Nice Sub plot

I imagine that certain people on the site would hold that he is a wimp if he doesn't cancel the wedding and kick the two of them out of house!

rightbankrightbankover 8 years ago
Dear Kezza67

you do like to slip in the zingers don't you.

Here I was, hoping for a heartwarming reunion with father and daughter and you take it to another level entirely.

well played.

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