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I look back into the bathroom; steam coming out of it now, the shower is running. I smile as I get up and enter the humid bathroom.
Well, after all, sometimes even the best dinners require a doggie bag.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 15 years agoi've saved this to 'my favourites' - just to remind myself that a good, well written story is actually possible. excellent.
Jennyloover 16 years agoAbsolutely, brilliant. Was sorry to see that this author has not written anything more. Please, "Jack," come back...
Anonymousalmost 17 years agoSure loved this story, but feel the end sucked. Was waiting for more of the saga when I turned the page. Please continue on with what he does with the gal, does he keep her????
FallingToFlyover 17 years agoAnd read them, and read them, but I still love them, Tyler. They are truly and completely entertaining, and I love coming back to enjoy them.
FtF
MrDevilinBlackabout 18 years agoLove the sardonic humor, poking fun at the human condition. Being a reader of vampire novels, I would say to you, keep writing and have a publisher read your work. Jack could be a winner as a subject for a novel, and not just a short novella. I could see Jack invading the environs of St. Louis and come up against Anita Blake (focus character of Laurell Hamilton's novels), or telling of his exploits across the world during the 20th century. Keep up the good work, and I'll expect to see you on the bookshelves of Borders.
Anonymousover 18 years agoFRESH TAKE ON AN OLD SUBJECT, ENJOYED THE TRILOGY AND HOPE THERE ARE FUTURE INSTALLMENTS. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoWell Jack, I must say, you put on quite a show... I would love to know how life with your new toy works out. I truly enjoyed reading all three parts of this submission. Please continue.
Anonymousabout 19 years agoThis was an excellent story! I loved the 1st person, diary style. Very graphic and sexy. The humour was great! You've got a great way of writing and I throughly enjoyed this. Thank you!
