All Comments on 'Jack Be Quick Ch. 08'

Just to say - thank you for letting us enjoy this lovely story.

It was a real pleasure to read your story!

I do remember one student who was dismissed for drinking , card playing and low grades Then convinced a leading scientist at MIT that he knew more chemistry than he did. The following year he just took the final exams in all needed credits and in one more year he got his doctorate.... So I think that Trudy should have gotten a better deal...

Thanks for this series.

It was very entertaining.

I really enjoyed this story - except for the last chapter. I found this to be a real non-sequitur. I have the feeling, you got fed up with the story and you had no idea how to round it up in a hurry. A frustrating ending.

Really good story, but I feel the fake kidnapping etc was a bit of a cop out tbh, but then that can happen in story where the author effectively paints themselves into a corner, I’ve only seen one author do that and that write their way back out, albeit with a slightly contorted plotline.

Regards, Ppfzz. 4⭐️