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sandbankssandbanksover 9 years ago
What a treat!

When the saga reached Chapter 10, one would have magined it to taper off and end into a glorious climax.

But not rxm76! Being so creative, he has woven yet another awesome tale, as a flashback, and have incorporated it into developing Jack Grierson further. The author has given Jack more character with newer emotions and a new side to him.

The author knows how to seduce and taunt the reader into craving for more and wait for further chapters.

Thanks for listening to your readers, but grateful for not blindingly doing so and letting your creative juices flow.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Did I mis something. Where , which page is the sword fight?

jxa2012jxa2012over 5 years agoAuthor
Swordplay

The swordplay between Prince Mushtaq and Jack happens off camera.

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I write because I enjoy it. I've been weaving erotic stories since I was a teenager - first with my sister, then by myself. I have published my stories on a variety of sites. I'm always looking to improve. So send me your feedback! My Jack Grierson series of stories is a bod...