All Comments on 'Jackie and Me'

Nothing like keeping it in the family. Hope you write about the return train trip.

If I could get fu*ked like that on the train, I'd give up my car. Hot! Hot! Hot! D'Angela Carr

This story started off extremely well and I thought that possibly you were going to make a baby for your brother to "father". But then you turned to queer activity and that ruined the whole story.

Wonderful story. would love to hear how Barb and Jackie first discovered each other and more sex with them and other people.

Now that is the way to keep it in the family. I always love your stories and this one is great. No I do not go for the same Sex stuff but this one is woooohooooo hot. Keep up the great work. TTFN

man I love this story it was hot write more I love to hear more even the gay sex was good

I read until it got to to the living room. Great for me to that point. Thanks.

If it’s your thing, keep reading. The writing was solid.

No hate from me even if it veered away from what I like.

Keep writing!