All Comments on 'Jackin' Jill Ch. 01'

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21stcv21stcvabout 9 years ago
good start

a little short though, does

Jill ever come to the UK?

Celibate1Celibate1about 9 years ago
First Chapter

The first chapter was complete in itself, so I can't wait to see how you carry on the story... Thank you.

ohface69ohface69about 9 years ago
Very hot

I really enjoyed the first chapter looking forward to much more. This is definitely one of those wish you were in that situation stories. Kudos to the writer I will be checking out more of your stuff.

WatcherRobWatcherRobabout 9 years ago
Big grin

This story left a big grin and my face. Would be so much fun to have been Jack.

auhunter04auhunter04over 6 years ago

Interesting good start

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