All Comments on 'Jackin' Jill Ch. 05'

by LesLumens

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
So hot

This was hot as hell! Wish it was me. I think Jill is Denise's online friend too, and that's what's going to happen in the second part. Can't wait!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Reply to Anonymous #1

I agree. It was amazing. And I had that same suspicion about her online friend, especially when Jill said she's just been another girl's first, but I think we just had (on the last page) a in-two-places thing.

medic452medic452about 8 years ago
Reply to anonymous #2

The story only says that Denise is wanting to meet with a friend, does not specify that it is the online friend.

medic452medic452about 8 years ago
You are a master writer

LesLumins,

You have a talent with this style of writing. I cannot wait for the next part to be uploaded.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Sorry this story didn't continue. I thought for sure Denise's friend was going to be Jill.

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