by LesLumens
This was hot as hell! Wish it was me. I think Jill is Denise's online friend too, and that's what's going to happen in the second part. Can't wait!
I agree. It was amazing. And I had that same suspicion about her online friend, especially when Jill said she's just been another girl's first, but I think we just had (on the last page) a in-two-places thing.
The story only says that Denise is wanting to meet with a friend, does not specify that it is the online friend.
LesLumins,
You have a talent with this style of writing. I cannot wait for the next part to be uploaded.
Sorry this story didn't continue. I thought for sure Denise's friend was going to be Jill.