All Comments on 'Jacob's Beloved'

Absolutely stunning - not many stories evoke such intense emotions the way yours did. Literotica authors have written about many kinds of love but you have shown what I believe to be an embodiment of the portrayal of true love, keep writing greeneyelove ? you are very talented.

Thanks xox

I think sometimes Lit authors forget that yes indeed there are moments of amazing unending wonderful sex... but there is also amazing unending unmatched love also. I feel that you have found it in this story. Thank you for writing it. Always, E

Wonderfully written--this is the kind of writting I always hope to come across when visiting this site. A touching,erotic tale by an eloquent and gifted writer. I hope to see more in the future from this author.

This story was one of the best I have read, and have found, here in Literotica. It combines romance, erotic and delves into the true meaning of beauty and love. Honestly speaking, this have been one of the few stories that was outstandingly written. You have the potential of a great writer. Please continue writing more stories like these, as many people will enjoy it like I most certainly did.

The sensory details and extent you went to describe the story were incredible. Definitely my new favorite.

I absolutely loved it. Hope there is another sequel. Excellent. I buy books to read this stuff.... how lovely it exists here.

i never thought i could come across such a touching love story like this one here in lit...everthing about it is perfect!

Lovely story, romantic! Mabey a little too much description; make sure you know what all of your words mean, and that they fit what you are trying to describe. But all in all, beautifully written, I hope you keep writing!

Your story was so well written. I know her pain because its what I feel when I look in the mirror and see my own scars. I hope one day I too will find a "Jacob".

I forgot to breathe while turning the page. Thank you for such a incredible story. One more chapter about the after would be awesome.

Wow. And again wow. You do realise this is literotica you are writing to right? I mean this story is amazingly high class and written so....well. I can't believe a story like this made its way on here. It's like finding that "beautiful needle in a grimy haystack". Truly. Wow.

If only real life were like that...its good to dream though.

this is truly a beautiful story, written by a gifted author. i have never read its equal on this site. thank you for it, and i hope you write more.

That was so beautiful! I want a vampire!

Hooray, a story on literotica that doesn't suck!

Nicely done. Makes want to hear more of this story.

Please continue this story, I would love to read more.

Most of the time i can only find stories that are only about sex. But this one is so much more than that. I feel its about helping someone find the true beauty in themselves even when they cant see a trace of it. Jacobs Beloved was the best story i have ever read on this site. Please keep writing. =)

This story is so fantastic I could feel every word you have a wonderful way with words

I love your writing! Even the few grammatical errors could not take away from the exquisite nature of this story. Great job!

I would love to see you write more vampire romance stories! This was so beautifully written erotic and romantic! I connected with Danica because I too have a body that I do not find beautiful,but it's due to the way I was born not because of an accident. I wish there was a vampire like Jacob who could help me see my true beauty and make me feel desired like Danica felt!

Wow! You have such a wonderful way with words that it makes the story so much richer and wonderful. It's just too bad that it had to end where it did, leaving us readers wishing for the next chapter in the lives of Jacob and Danica. It's also sad that I can only give this story five stars because it goes well beyond that. Loved the story, thanks.