All Comments on 'Jacqueline Learns to Relax'

Jesus woman, you are very good. Mostly superb writing. Thank you. Five stars.

A very nicely written little fantasy piece. Good dirty fun!

Your story was a fun read for me!

I had no problem with your story at all. Enjoyed the fantasy!!

Thanks for Sharing!!! I look forward to your next submission!!!

"Do you want to suck my cock right now?"

Whoa! What did I miss? Who is this guy? Women pay to suck his cock? What kind of a place is this? I'm sorry, but good writing is more than just stringing words together coherently. The story has to work. Has to make sense at some level. I kept waiting for Jacqueline's dream to end. Not that that would have been creative--just understandable.

There are not many good writers on this site. Even fewer can hold the interest through the sex (think fast forwarding bad porn). I look forward to your next submission.

Please note the difference: "masseuse" is female, and "masseur" is male. "Man masseuse" is meaningless - it's as silly as saying "male actress".