All Comments on 'Jail Break'

Did not hold my interest

Trixi or Krissy?

Just a side note to anyone who reads this: her name is Trixi and I thought I fixed all the errors but if you find any, I'm sorry...I can't figure out how to edit it without deleting the entire story and then re-submitting it. If someone could help me that would be great.

This was sweet, i loved it and don't mind that ahole who said it was too long.

Good work and good job :-)

I enjoyed the story also. It was a little long, but I still liked it. On making corrections, at this point you have to contact the people where you made the submission :)

to bad that i was reading this one it ready suck big time

That was really good. Grabed my attention.