by Tastisha
One of my favorite stories on the website. Short, simple but just detailed enough to be great.
Well written! I have added your story to my favorite collection.
MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM I LOVED IT IT WAS WILD AND HARD AND SOFT AND SWEET NOW I NEED A COLD SHOWER
I though that was very well written. Love the dynamics of the stud-femme relationship. The teasing and buildup of arousal was great too. Thoroughly enjoyable, I want more!
It was almost too short of a story. The build up between them was good and you let us see into her thoughts as she struggled to accept what her body was responding to. I loved the way you had Jaime stop teasing and put it on the table, so-to-speak. The sex scene was made so much more erotic by the build-up and the afterglow scene brought it all together. I hope you write more.
I just love this story i came hard reading it keep up the wounderful work
The last paragraph captures it all. The combination of aggressiveness/hardness and softness/tenderness with only women in the room. To me, it's about as erotic and sensual as it gets. Check out "Taking Cara's Business" by Swinters and "Almost Chance" by noebode.
I love that your stud uses a strap-on.. I think it's a true likeness to many of the studs I know.. This was a hott story indeed.. Love that she worked in a hooter's style restaurant..
Wow.. I liked this.. I really hope that this continues, and that they get together. Because really, what's sex without love? I think your characters had great chemistry. Good job, and I hope to see more. <3 Marah
This was really good.. Its almost like u were in my head.
i wrote a similiar one n got a comment that it wasn't
lesbian sex cuz my character used a strap-on.. I can't help it that the character likes studs. Im looking forward
to your next story and maybe you should bring these two back for a sequel..
Or maybe two sequels. Well written and very sensuous. Let's hear more about the characters. Keep up the good work.
This is great story please!!! When you going to write part 2 for this one? Very nice build up and very erotic
Your story had a very natural progression to how these two got together. I hope to hear more about them.
Terrific story! I loved the build up to them finally coming together. Keep writing for I am interested in reading more.